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Jim Ruland's avatar

Keep going with Good and Evil. There is an absolute monster waiting for you.

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The morning story ritual with fancy coffee sounds perfect. I keep trying something similar but emails derail it every time. That Updike story is great - the father trying to controll the narrative vs the daughter's moral clarity is so uncomfortble in the best way. Also lol at "retroscopes" getting red squiggles, I feel you on the backstory dump thing though. Sometimes works but often just feels like an info packet.

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